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I went to eat hot cooker today, and ordered lots of mutton.
今天我去吃了麻辣香锅, 要了好些羊肉。
Then, I went to wal-mart, and bought two water cushions. I think that's cool!
然后, 我去了沃尔玛, 买了两个水坐垫。我认为它好凉快。
But Mom said they could be broken,and the water would overflow the cushions, then we would get wet.
但是妈妈说它会被打破, 水就会流出来, 然后我们就会被弄湿。
I don't think so.
我不这样认为。
I went to eat hot cooker today, and ordered lots of mutton.
In line 3 you said that you had bought two water cushions, but in line 4 your mother said that ‘it’ could be broken.
How a inconsistent problem it is!
Compiling ended with 2 error.
I really enjoy reading your blogs, either in English or Chinese. I think you can write longer bolg articles.
BTW, "order lots of mutton" should be "ordered lots of mutton". Do you know why?
It sounds you had a nice dinner. The no-chili spicy pot is really delicious. That’s special one which is Wal-mart style. I’m look forward to having it with you again.
To be honest, I’m not interesed in your water cushions which make me sick.
Sorry "I’m look forward to having it with you again."
should be "I’m looking forward to having it with you again." –Just in case wdb will point out my mistakes.